So...here's a poem or lyric or what have you that I created a while back and like a lot (dur). I got the inspiration for it in a dream and here's what makes it different: it has two endings. I love them both but if forced to choose I would have to go with the first because it's more dramatic and the second doesn't even really work without the first.

so in it's entirety here's my poem.


Glimmer in the Dark


The world has been plunged into darkness

but I possess one small glimmer of hope

and so, though others cannot see,

my vision is as bright as day.



I know that I can spread this light

so all will open their eyes

but I will never see that happen

because in doing so will extinguish my light.



so the question stands,

to jump or not to jump?


this is where it splits but I love both endings so Ill put them both down

#1

I feel I am an angel sent from above,

so I take flight

only to see my wings have broken

and I fall, I plummet.



They spread their wings and soar.



bittersweet, I know

#2

The world can wait another day,

my loved ones need me.

I must guide them through the darkness,

they will come to the place where I am

and may help me spread the light



So, gotta admit that it felt good to put it where other atrists can see it, but I've already won a few minor awards for it and I find that good enough for me. So though anything is welcome I won't listen to any critique unless you can prove your credentials. ha ha ha ha! See y'all later